Richard P Schoettger Sunday, June 26 2011 @ 06:39 AM EDT Andrew, I like this much better than the first one as it is much more distinguishable as to the subjects of the image...the kids. Also, I do like bringing them forward and eliminating the road from the first as the road was of no importance and the kids in the water are. On this one....I like the image, but perhaps lighten the contrast a bit and desaturation the yellows too...just a hair. My opinion...others may vary, but it seems a little too much yellow. But again....I like this much better!