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Stone Mountain, Georgia
Tired young boy walking up Stone Mountain.

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Fri Mar 19, '10 10:29AM
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Media ID 20110329183728528  
Date Fri Mar 19, '10 10:29AM
Comments 2
Views 1232
Uploaded By unknown
Aperture Value f//8
Date/Time Fri Mar 19, '10 06:29AM
Exposure Bias 0 EV
Flash No Flash
Focal Length 250 mm
ISO 100
Make Canon
Metering Mode Pattern
Model Canon EOS REBEL T1i
Shutter Speed Value 1/640 sec
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He certainly does look tired. I would crop out that black patch in the top right corner. It would also be interesting to see this using a wider angle lens that provides more context. As presented, I can see a tired little boy but I don't get that sense of place that conveys the extra bit of information about why he looks that way. The wider angle lens would include more of the surroundings and also make the boy smaller. Changing that size relationship would really intensify how this young fellow is challenged by this great big place.

Edited on Monday, April 04 2011 @ 11:38 AM EDT by Walter
Thank you for commenting Walter! I will definitely consider your advice, as this is the first photo I've posted to a Weekly Challenge. I am new to TPN and certainly appreciate any constructive feedback.
Edited on Tuesday, April 05 2011 @ 12:47 AM EDT by